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This page shows the changes between two versions of a post by PigeonGuru in the topic "Writing style" on Talk:Assault rifle. You can see other versions of this post at its history page.
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You could make it better by stating the general purpose of the weapon in the first or second sentence. However, to say that a weapon is the 'best' weapon at any stage would be quite subjective and is best left to the 'Analysis' part below, as such I relocated the sentence there.
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I took a look at the introductory paragraphs, and indeed they could be confusing for non-veteran players. However, to say that a weapon is the 'best' weapon at any stage would be quite subjective and is thus best left to the 'Analysis' part below, as such I relocated the sentence there.
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A better method would be to state the general purpose of a weapon; in this case, the assault rifle would be said to be a versatile weapon usable in most combat situations.
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