Hiya. The section you added to is a verbatim reproduction of the lore primer. We want to keep that section intact so people can refer to the original wording as needed so I'm going to revert that edit but I was hoping you'd replicate your points elsewhere on the page (you can see what you wrote in the lage history). If not, I'll try to get around to reformatting it and readding it myself when I get time.
I don't wanna discourage you from editing, but I do have to keep a copy of the original version.